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Any news regarding the next update? :)

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WTF IS WITH THIS COMMENT SECTION
I look on the games page "Hmmm, this looks like a interesting game. Lets see what the comemnts have to say about it"
The horror...

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Reality is for people who cant imagine

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Hello friends, let's study the comment below mine shall we?  
Here we see someone who went through the trouble to make a brand new itch.io account in order to post a single comment erroneously accusing others of pedophilia.

This action alone tells us quite a lot about the individual.

First we can note that this individual feels the obsessive compulsive need to denigrate others. From this we can infer that said individual leads a life of isolation, after all I don't need to tell you that fallaciously accusing large groups of people of pedophilia in public spaces isn't exactly the key to social acceptance.
 
Next we can speculate that because of their isolation this individual struggles to justify their existence in their own mind, which further fuels their obsessive compulsive need to slander others.

Lastly, I would like to point out the s/n the individual chose...
a misspelling of Freelancer, which is a euphemism for unemployed.
Taken alone their choice of s/n means nothing, but in the context of our other observations we can conclude this points further to the individual being a social outcast who is completely disregarded by their peers.

This has been a study in analyzing $#it posts, now back to our regular commenting.

Lmao, Well said

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Furry... Gross

Just stay away from kindergartens

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What kind of degenerate goes out of their way to post on a furry visual novel to accuse them of pedophilia lmao

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What kind of degenerate goes out of their way to make a visual novel to lure in kids to their discord server to Ava Tyson them?

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bro are u fucking retarded 

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First of all, don't generalize that furries are pedophiles. We are strongly against such acts.

Secondly, the server specifically mentions that nobody under 18 is allowed to be there.


And finally... why are you accusing us???

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A little sus now are we?

Just here to disturb y'all!

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Nueheheh..

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Potential Spoilers? Idk















Is it just me or is the cryptic quote that fell off from the book is cymreag?

"mecanwaith enaid acant y ddraig"

the dragon soul mechanism


finding a welsh (cymreag) sentence in a today media shock me, i thought my language is dead lol

also what about the dragon soul??

cant wait to find out!

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Like in ever game with fluffy chars weI want see ๐Ÿ”ฅโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅโ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธโ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


๐Ÿ˜Ž

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So can I make choices (choices what the MC says and stuff) or is it just for reading? And is there a romance in it? And if yes, with whom? 

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I love the main character so much and the merchant is so beautiful hehe I hope to see both of them

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It's not too bad in reality it's stylish it's clean from the start it shows us a rather hardworking character we'll say that but I won't say anything I can't wait to see the sequel well done

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0_0 ???

No for real like wtf?  lol that was my reaction when I read that.

Lol x

What did the post say? 

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This VN is really nice, I really liked it, I can't wait to see what happens next ^^

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every single thing is perfect, from art, characters and their visual designs, backgrounds, music, writing, world building, foreshadowing, the lore 10/10 across the board, can't wait for more~ 

my only question, is Gale non-binary? 

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non-binary aka in denial of course

Yikes you need to go get some therapy. There's nothing wrong with someone being non-binary. 

The link above to your discord server mistakenly directs to ko-fi

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Heyyy i recognize that pfp its Alex from Tennis Ace

Wow! Some hard work went into this and it really shows! The art is top notch, and the character and world building are all great!

Potential spoilers below.












I have only the smallest nitpick, the word inflammatory was substituted for the word flammable when describing gas from the lighter.

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hmm~ mac os problem sorry

Got the same error

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Very interesting world! I was confused a bit at the start but it started making more sense as I read further. The atmosphere of the Vn is done really well and the mysteries are so intriguing.

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Is there any romance in this?

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im going to take this question further. NSFW?

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Really strong start! Fun set of characters, well thought out world, a solid plot, and a very interesting take on magick, my only concern would be with how it started.

Because of how different everything is in this universe xou've created, I kinda felt thrown in as opposed to eased into it. I  think that either lengthening the story of the prologue or perhaps easing us into Zhangken's character will make it easier for readers to get into the flow.

I've really enjoyed what xou guys have released so far and am excited to see where the story might go~ ^^_

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mac version wont open :(

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Hello! I'm A Furry VN Enthusiast, always wanting to try New VNs out there and I seem to found one. Overall so far, this I got to say this is a Masterpiece! I look forward to see where its all going & will follow this until Sparks is done!

Very strong start! Great intro, Nice interesting mystery story world-building, music, magic, designs & presentations all top notch!. The art aspects i.e sprites, backgrounds & CGs were the deciding factor that made me want to pick up your VN. They are out of this world! The characters are fun especially Zhangken!

I want to let you know that I found out about your VN from this discord server as your VN got shared, mentioned as it has its own discussion channel & was overall sort of hyped around even before the released! They have an upcoming channel to show which potential New VNs that's worthy to keep an eye on.

If you're looking to promote/discuss/make more people aware of your VN or getting feedback, tips & networking or just want to hangout with other VN Creators in a FVN Community, I recommend coming to this discord server if you have discord

https://discord.gg/dFCMCmvEc2

They also have a lot of artist sharing & promoting their artworks so Nekku, Kemmuono & Kousen Zephyr are all welcome to have a look around! Huge fan of your guys art!

I thought I'd let you know. Its a great place of resources for VN Developers. There are many of them which can help you become a better developer as am sure they are willing to share their experiences & gives you some tips. You can also search for more specific people with talents like artist/musician/proofreader/editor/programmer etc.

Overall, there's a lot of helpful people and a nice atmosphere. I hope you will enjoy this server & wishing you luck for the future & how the next update will pan out!

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My guy i think you posted this in the wrong comment :p

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What a great introduction, I am very interested in what story you are telling. So many things to like; music, character art, unique magic, and the world building behind it all! The mystery of the protagonist's past and the finer details of what Zhangken observes really keep being in his head interesting.

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It looks great, I really want to play

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Tenho muita expectativa do jogo ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜